April 4, 2021 Salty Air Publishing Newsletter

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Outside Relative Humidity: 46%
Sunrise: 6:21 EDT
April 4, 2021 - Falmouth, MA
In this issue:
When is enough enough?
Gone Girl - Gillian Flynn
DALYs - Disability Adjusted Life Years
Writing Tools - Scrivener
How about a free book or two?
PHR books
PHR Work-in-Progress
When is enough enough?

Many years ago -  several life-times ago, back when had more hair on the top of my head - I worked on an assembly line building projection televisions. I had taken a correspondence course in electronics and thought it would be interesting to put these TVs together. I can't say that I knew what I was doing but there were terrific people around me who did. And beside they were really interesting. Among them there was the guy who set up the tuners who smoked dope in the parking lot at lunch and got off on all the pretty colors on the screen. There was a classical cellist who would play in the lunch room. It was a fun group.

Eventually they promoted me to one of the final test technicians. My first sets took me hours to get aligned. But after a hundred or so, I could do it in minutes. For those first sets, I would align one element and then another which would pull the first element out of alignment. And when I went to the third, the first two would have changed. Gradually I learned that all the alignments happened together. The TV was a system. Too much adjusting and tweaking can be worse than not enough.

A book is a system too. All the words work together to paint the story. You definitely have to edit and edit and rewrite and rewrite, but it is important to know when it's right and stop tweaking.

Stay well,
Paul
Paul H. Raymer
Gone Girl - Gillian Flynn
Thrillers & Suspense

Do you ever wonder how authors can embed themselves into the minds of characters, characters who are purely evil or mentally deranged. Where do those horrific thoughts come from? I suppose it's better to write them down than manifest them in reality.

Gone Girl is written from binary first person points of view - alternating between Amy Elliott Dunne and her husband, Nick Dunne. The book gets off to a slow start, to the point where I almost abandoned it. Too many books too little time. But this book was listed as one of the top mysteries of the past decade AND it was made into a movie starring Ben Affleck and Rosamund Pike so something has to happen, and it does.

Amy is amazing and she says so. She is a shape shifter who plans those futures shifts well in advance so that she can punish those who offend her. In her diary at the beginning of the book, Amy seems to be sweetness and light. She was brought up as a star in her parents' children's book series. Everyone loves her and is devastated when she disappears. But she has set it up to point the finger at Nick as the perpetrator who has been cheating on her.

The author does paint herself into a corner, and although how she steps out of it is reasonable, it's a bit of a stretch. There are also details of money and timing that bother me and I think that Nick, the husband, although seriously badly treated could have done better and doesn't come out of this story well.

This is one of those stories that I felt the reader was not treated kindly.
DALYs - Disability Adjusted Life Years

Disability Adjusted Life Years (DALYs) is a measurement of reduced healthy life on a scale developed by the World Health Organization (WHO). It is a measurement of the gap between current health status and an ideal health situation where the entire populaiton lives to an advanced age, free of disease and disability. For example, a 5-year illness that reduces the quality of life to 4/5 of a previously active healthy year is valued at one DALY lost. Smoking lowers life expectancy by 10 years.

There are many, many elements that effect the length of a life starting from before we are born. We don't have data on the health of occupants in energy tight houses. We're sealing up everything from windows and doors to light fixtures and heating systems. Much of that effort is directed at energy savings, but part of it is to establish control of where air is coming into the house and where it is leaking out. Air sealing not only saves energy but it also reduces uncontrolled moisture intrusion as well as pest entry pathways.

Tight houses are great for a lot of reasons and we're spending more time in them. Mechanical ventilation is often rejected by utility programs because new air moving into the house has to be reconditioned and that costs money. By using DALYs, we can connect ventilation to dollars the way we connect insulation and air sealing to dollars.

Bad indoor air quality effects health and bad health effects productivity and poor ventilation impacts indoor air quality. All that works out to be about $400/person/year in lost productivity. And that is how the cost of ventilation can be monetized.
Writing Tools - Scrivener

I have been using Scrivener on my Mac for close to 10 years. I really love the software. It does so many things. I tried the Windows version, but was not impressed. But on the Mac it is awesome. Years ago I bought into a program called Learn Scrivener Fast by Joseph Michael. It's a terrific program and got me rocking along. But I forgot a lot of the stuff, and when I tried to get back there recently because I wanted to resurrect my editing skills, my password wouldn't work.

So I shrugged my proverbial shoulders and figured that was that, but I sent Joseph a note just in case. Imagine my glee when they got back to me with an updated password and a new site with all sorts of new goodies! Now that's great customer service.

So I would heartily endorse Scrivener (for the Mac) and the Learn Scrivener Fast support software. Don't be put off by all the grinning marketing hype.
 
How about a free book or two?

BookFunnel provides a means for a group of authors to get together to give away copies of their books in return for adding subscribers to their mailing lists. I have not read any of these books (except my own, of course) so I can't attest to the quality of the contents. However, you can't beat the price! These are all classified as Mystery & Suspense.
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PHR Books
Residential Ventilation Handbook V2
Recalculating Truth
Death at the Edge of the Diamond
Also available on-line and in fine bookshops.
PHR Work-in-Progress
The new novel - Second Law - is moving along extremely well, thank you. First draft is complete. Moving on to editing!
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March 21, 2021 Salty Air Publishing Newsletter

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Outside Relative Humidity: 50%
Sunrise 6:44 EDT
March 21, 2021 - Falmouth, MA
In this issue:
Stone Walls
Salman Rushdie - Haroun and the Sea of Stories
Residential Ventilation Notes
Bunch of Grapes Bookstore - Vineyard Haven, MA
Some Bits for Benjamin Bunny and the Rabbit Hole
PHR Books
PHR Work-in-Progress
 
Stone Walls

I am extremely lucky that I live across the street from Beebe Woods here in Falmouth, MA. It consists of 383 acres of land that were donated to the town by the Josiah K. Lily family in 1972. There are trails throughout the woods that intersect many stone walls. I marvel at those stones. Each stone had to be manually lifted, carried, and placed on the wall. The walls were a dumping ground for the stones that appeared on the fields each spring after the frost heaves drove them to the surface. Settlers thought they were pushed up by devils in the earth because they just kept coming back. The mind boggles at all those hours and hours of backbreaking labor. Truly there are stories everywhere.

Stay well,
Paul
Paul H. Raymer

P.S. Check out this YouTube video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zcLQz-oR6sw

P.P.S there's more to this newsletter  - please keep reading.
Salman Rushdie - Haroun and the Sea of Stories
This is another book that is inspiring for writers and story tellers. I had the great pleasure of listening to Salman Rushdie's Master Class. It is worth listening to his wisdom and to hear him read some of his own writing as he massages the  sounds and the shapes of his words. Many writers read their own writing at a uniform pace, but Rushdie reads the words as though his voice is an instruments and the written word is the musical score.
This is particularly  true in this tale of Haroun seeking the source of the tales recounted by his storyteller father Rashid Khalifa (also known as the Shah of Blah). Rushdie plays with names like the Plentimaw fish (Plentimaw fish in the sea) and flutters in and out of reality. Haroun is guided through the story by Iff the genie and Butt the Hoopoe who explain things that perplex him - and the reader.
At one point Iff tells him to pick a bird, but Haroun can only see a wooden peacock and Iff chastises him for not being able to trust things he can't see. "How much have you seen, eh," Iff asks. "Africa, have you seen it? No? Then is it truly there? And submarines? Huh? Also hailstones, baseballs, pagodas? Gold mines? Kangaroos, Mount Fujiyama, the North Pole? And the past, did it happen? And the future, will it come? Believe in your own eyes and you'll get into a lot of trouble, hot water, a mess."

If you ever get stuck trying to find a story to tell, you can find happy endings, beginnings, and middles between the covers of this book if you're willing to just let go and flow along with the words.
Residential Ventilation Notes
I was thinking about bathroom fans the other day - that may be strange in normal daily life but life has been far from normal recently. I want to be sure that the air that flows through a bathroom fans comes from the outside, flows through the house, sneaks into the bathroom, and gets pushed out all the way through the ducting to the termination fitting on the outside of the house. If that path is not complete - if the air ends up in the attic or inside a wall cavity - the pollutants that air stream is carrying will end up there as well.
What pollutants are in that air stream? Well, there are the VOCs from the mellifluous odors in the bathroom caused by flatulence and other unsavory, bodily expulsions, but there can also be moisture from the shower.
When the shower is running, it produces steam or water vapor. When the bathroom fan is running, it sucks the air out of the bathroom causing it to be at a lower pressure than the bathroom surroundings. Because of the wonderful second law of thermodynamics, high pressure moves toward lower pressure, and so air is drawn back into the bathroom, replacing the air pushed out by the fan. The steam in the bathroom air causes the relative humidity (RH) to rise. As the cooler air from the rest of the house is drawn in, the RH goes down. The flow through the fan is effectively drying out the air in the bathroom.
But it has to run long enough - potentially several hours after the shower stops. All that time, water is running down the walls of the shower and the damp towels are drying. If the fan is not run long enough, moisture will condense on wall and ceiling surfaces that are below the dew point, and mold will be encouraged to grow.
Bunch of Grapes Bookstore - Vineyard Haven, MA

Bunch of Grapes has been on the island of Martha's Vineyard for over 40 years. It is an independent, locally owned bookstore that is a community of writers and readers, featuring a carefully curated selection of the finest books and sidelines, and hosting author events year-round. Dawn Braasch, the proprietor says, "I will always believe in the power of reading and it has now been proven that reading the physical book vs an ebook is so much better. I'm excited about our future."
Some Bits for Benjamin Bunny and the Rabbit Hole

Wordpress/Anchor connection.
I tried the Wordpress connection to Anchor this week, and if you want to make quick connection to a podcast, this is a good way to go. You will want to start it from your Wordpress site. This first time I tried it, I made a connection to Anchor directly. There may be a way to amend that from the Anchor or Wordpress sites, but I couldn't figure it out. So I deleted that account, and started over from Wordpress and from there it was flawless. Anchor pulls all your blogs in and then with the click of a couple of buttons, it turns them into podcasts. And the computer synthesized readers, sounded amazingly good. They will pick up the nuances of the punctuation if you adjust things.
The next issue becomes: do you really want to do a podcast. Do you have a good name for it? Do you have an enticing description? Are you willing to dedicate the time? Hmm. I'll let you know.

I would really love to know what podcasts you listen to. I would welcome your recommendation.

Microphone
If you are going to do your podcast in your own voice, you might try an Audio-Technica ATR2100 or a Zoom ZDM-1 microphone. Either one would be a good choice.
PHR Books
Residential Ventilation Handbook V2
Recalculating Truth
Death at the Edge of the Diamond
Also available on-line and in fine bookshops.
PHR Work-in Progress
Second Law - First draft complete and printed. Now comes the editing dance.
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March 7, 2021 Salty Air Publishing Newsletter

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Outside Relative Humidity: 41%
Sunrise 6:08 AM
March 7, 2021 - Falmouth, MA
In this issue:
Lady Bug, Lady Bug -
Claire Dewitt and the City of the Dead
Mold and Frozen Pipes
Celebrating Independent Bookstores
Some Bits for Benjamin Bunny and the Rabbit Hole
PHR Books
PHR Work-in-Progress

   Lady Bug, Lady Bug -

I'm going to ask you to think about making decisions. Every tangible object that surrounds us is the result of a series of decision - decisions piling on other decisions. Look at this toy butterfly and lady bug. Can you imagine the meeting in the toy company office?

"What do we need to fill the toy bug market?"
"I know, let's make a lady bug that rolls around on the floor, spins in circles, and occasionally flips over onto its back. Won't that be fun?"
"That's crazy, Phil. How about a butterfly?"
"How are you going to get it to do anything? It has to do something or the kids won't like it."
"It can flip its wings."
"The lady bug's easy. It's easy to pick a color for a lady bug. I mean it can just be red with a black face. Oh, and a smile. It's got to have a smile, but what color is the butterfly?"
"How about yellow? Green?"
"No, it's got to be blue. My daughter likes blue. We could put yellow circles on the wings with a few green polka dots. And it's got to have a smile too."

You can see how the conversation would go. There would have to be meetings with engineering to design the clockwork mechanism, design the injection molds, set up the molding machines, and the painting machines. On and on. Meeting after meeting. Decision after decision. These are all decisions for a simple plastic toy that will sell for less than a dollar and probably be crushed under foot in weeks after distribution.
The patterns in rugs, the molding around a door, the ingredients in a meal, the words on this page - all these things require a multitude of decisions. They interlock and pile on each, each decision has to be made in sequence. Many, if not most, of those decision must be made from knowledge and experience.
No wonder they say that life is hard.


Stay well,
Paul
Paul H. Raymer
P.S there's more to this newsletter  - please keep reading.
Claire Dewitt and the City of the Dead

I discovered this at https://crimereads.com/the-10-best-crime-novels-of-the-last-decade/  Maybe I'm behind on this, but this book was a surprise to me. Clair Dewitt claims to be the world's greatest detective. At least in her own mind. The story takes place a year or two after Hurricane Katrina when the city was devastated by flood waters. There is none of the buzz and pulse and bright lights of touristy New Orleans. It is a war zone populated by gangs and drive-by shootings. Claire has little respect for the police or the criminal justice system.
She is haunted by memories of her mentor, Constance Darling who introduced her to Jacques Silette who wrote just one book, Détection. Gran does such a good job of developing this fictitious detective that I had to do a Google search to determine if the book was real.
One of the numerous threads
in the story is learning to see the world and its accompanying clues as Silette saw them. This mysterious book seems to magically permeate many parts of Gran’s story - levels removed from reality by Gran to Dewitt to Constance Darling to Silette - deeper and deeper. The dominant characters in the story are Silette and New Orleans. And then there are the green parrots!

This is not a cozy, quick read, comfy chair crime story. It’s definitely worth reading.

 
 
Mold and Frozen Pipes
 
You may have heard that there was a cold weather event in Texas that the state was not prepared for. The winter design temperature for here in Falmouth, MA is 6 °F. That means that my heating system should be running constantly at that temperature, keeping the house at 70 °F. If it's not, the heating system is oversized. 99% of the time here in Falmouth, the temperature won't get colder than that.

The winter design temperature for Dallas is 19 °F. So houses in Dallas should be built to withstand the cold - because it will get cold. And it did. And it gets colder inside the house when the heating system doesn't work because there is no power. It takes a while for pipes to freeze because they gradually lose heat to the surrounding air, abiding by the Second Law of Thermodynamics - heat moving to cold.

And when the water in the pipe thaws and starts moving again under the pressure in the system, it sprays out of the busted pipes and the surroundings get wet. That moisture is one of the three elements required for mold growth: moisture, mold spores, and mold food like the cellulose in gypsum board. The mold has a party! It can grow in just 24 to 48 hours.

It is extremely important that it be cleaned up carefully. Don't just rip out large expanses of wall board because invisible mold spores will fly off everywhere and you will wind up chasing mold around the house.



 
Celebrating Independent Bookstores


Books By the Sea
1600 Falmouth Road, Centerville, MA
Books By The Sea was the realization of a lifelong dream of Joyce Phillips to own a specialty bookstore that promoted local authors and catered to a unique, book loving community. Joyce passed away in 2007, but her memory lives on in the hearts of her customers and the authors whose lives she touched. Her husband, Tom, along with a dedicated and committed staff, have continued this store as her legacy to Cape Cod.

Books By the Sea is located in the Bell Tower Mall  --  Phone 508-771-9100
 
Some Bits for Benjamin Bunny and the Rabbit Hole

 

Wordpress Collaboration with Anchor/Spotify

For an easy way to turn your Wordpress blog posts into podcasts there's Anchor which allows you to connect any Wordpress.com account to a free Anchor account. Then just use text to speech technology and you have another way to promote your work easily. Learn more
 

Masterclass

My children gave me a subscription to the Masterclass platform, and it's been great. I have listened to Dan Brown, David Baldacci, and Salman Rushdie so far. I think it has done a great deal to improve my writing and to confirm that I was doing a lot of things right. And these amazing craftsmen talk to you one to one. It's like having them right here. Learn more
PHR Books
Residential Ventilation Handbook V2
Recalculating Truth
Death at the Edge of the Diamond
Also available on-line and in fine bookshops
PHR Work-in-Progress

The new novel - Second Law - is moving along extremely well, thank you. Shooting for completion of the first draft this month!
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February 21, 2021 Salty Air Publishing Newsletter

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Outside Relative Humidity: 80%
Sunrise 6:29 AM
February 21, 2021 - Falmouth, MA
In this issue:
Something's been bugging me
The Universal Baseball Association

Mini-Split Heat Pumps
Memorable Bookstores
Some Bits for Benjamin Bunny and the Rabbit Hole

"Something's been bugging me"  -

Andy Rooney, the curmudgeon who used to make closing comments on 60 Minutes letting the world know what was on his mind in the smoothest of ways, commonly used this phrase. And those words pop up in my mind regularly. Particularly in regard to computer things. Many years ago when I was working with my Apple II Plus, I wrote my own software so when something went wrong I knew it was my fault and I knew that with enough effort I could dig into the lines of code and find the 'O' that was supposed to be '0'. Now I have no idea what my computer is doing unless the software chooses to function flawlessly. I want to know what my computer is doing when it is spinning some kind of wheel on the screen. (It used to be a flipping hour glass. Guess it's gone digital now. Wonder who made that decision?) But why can't it give me a running dialog of what it is doing? Doesn't it know what it's doing?

What particularly bugs me is when I get a message like:

Your account does not meet the necessary requirements. Please review the requirements and update your account.

And then it sends me off to a massive page of gibberish and rules without telling me which requirements I have failed to meet! It's like the software is laughing, "I know, but I'm not going to tell you." How about this? "Nope, hah, hah, hah." If it laughed, that would be more entertaining.

I'm sure that Andy would have a lot to say about the remote controls for mini-split air conditioners. There was a massive learning curve with programmable thermostats. Can we really expect people to understand the DRY mode in a mini-split operation? And what if you have multiple distribution heads in different rooms? Can I have heat in the living room and AC in the bedroom? Nope. If it actually said that, it would be helpful.

I won't go on. One of Andy's consummate skills was knowing when to stop and leave us thinking. But I suggest that we don't need Andy to point out that we need to improve our customer education.

Let me know what's bugging you and we can commiserate!


Stay well,
Paul
Paul H. Raymer
P.S there's more to this newsletter  - please keep reading.
The Universal Baseball Association, Inc. J. Henry Waugh Prop. Robert Coover

I confess that I am a fan of Robert Coover's writing. I would say that he is a writer's writer. He is the author of ten novels,  tons of short stories and novellas. He is not a writer that I can plug into any particular genre - he just dances among the words.

This was his second novel written in 1968, long before computerized Fantasy Leagues. Henry Waugh, the protagonist,  invents a baseball league. No, way more than that. He has created a world in which the Universal Baseball Association exists - all the players, all their histories and their families, the teams, the reporters, everything. Coover creates Waugh's tension in the outcome of the games and the success or failure of the players with such mastery that I carried the feelings of the players that moved on throws of the protagonist's dice in my head for days. Think about it: Coover created a character that created characters that imbued feelings in me as a distant reader.

In his most recent book Huck Out West published in 2017 Coover moved Huckleberry Finn west and managed to carry the character's unique way of speaking enticingly throughout the book. An exceptional feat.

Robert Coover's writing is a tribute to imagination and to writers and should be celebrated for his extraordinary skill.
Mini-Split Heat Pumps

It's a fact that ductwork is expensive and bulky. It's difficult to retrofit - add to a house that is already built and heats with hot water or steam. And a window air conditioner is a pain to put in the window in the summer and take out and store away in the fall.

A mini-split heat pump can provide both heating and cooling and they are relatively simple to add to an existing room because there is no ducting - the beast just hangs there on the wall staring down and pushing out warm or cold air. And they can work extremely well.

There are advantages to ductwork. One is that the conditioned air is distributed all over the house. (You're not likely to put a mini-split head in the bathroom.) Mini-splits have poor filters. The promotional materials talk about nano-platinum and electrostatic anti-allergy enzyme filters but these don't compare to two or three inch filters that can be slid into the air flow in ducted systems.

Another thing is adding or removing moisture from the air. Most mini-splits have a DRY mode. This is a manually selected mode of operation that, in the majority of systems, does not operate on a measurement of Relative Humidity (RH). In this mode the fan slows down allowing the air to pass more slowly across the coil to extract more moisture from the air. But at the same time the air flow is cooling. To take it out of DRY mode if the room gets too cool, the occupant has to select cooling on the remote control. Selecting cooling if the occupant is too cool seems counterintuitive to me.

This is a product that requires careful design, sizing, and installation and reading/studying the manual.
Memorable Bookstores

The remarkable Paco Underhill, author of Why we Buy and the Call of the Mall and other perceptive tomes, and who worked for the Independent Booksellers Association off and on for almost 20 years suggested three of his favorite bookstores.

The Strand in New York City "Landmark shop specializing in new, used & rare books from philosophy to finance, plus bookish gifts."
Bookpeople in Austin, Texas "Large, locally owned bookstore with regular readings plus coffee bar & quirky gift items for sale."
RJJulia in Madison, Connecticut,  a comprehensive, customer focused  independent bookstore.
   
Some Bits for Benjamin Bunny and the Rabbit Hole

Gold Touch - Totally adjustable to fit the body's particular preferences. This company has ergonomic keyboards and mice and a bunch of other interesting tools to make working with the computer more comfortable.

Reedsy - A writing and formatting tool for authors.
The Reedsy Book Editor is a book production tool that allows you to effortlessly write and format a piece of writing for publishing.

Affinity - Does everything that Adobe can with professional results at a tiny fraction of the price. "Affinity Publisher is the next generation of professional publishing software. From books, magazines and marketing materials, to social media templates, website mock-ups and more, this incredibly smooth, intuitive app gives you the power to combine your images, graphics and text to make beautiful layouts ready for publication."

Newsletters & Blogs worth looking at:
Jane Friedman's Electric Speed Newsletter - This is a simple, clean, bi-weekly newsletter about a variety of interesting topics that goes out to 35,000 subscribers.

The Creative Penn Blog - Joanna Penn has a pile of useful stuff in her blog.

And a recommendation from subscriber Peter Hubbe: Amanda Maffei's Musings - These are short . . . musings. Ideas and commentary about the life around us.

Feel free to send me recommendations about newsletter, blogs, software that will be useful for all of us.

 
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February 7, 2021 Salty Air Publishing Newsletter

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Outside Relative Humidity: 56%
Sunrise: 6:47
February 7, 2021 - Falmouth, MA
In this issue:
A Simple Grapefruit Seed
In The Ground by Jeff Carson
Pollutants
Live & Just Keep Learning
Independent Bookstores
Some Bits for Benjamin Bunny
 

  A Simple Grapefruit Seed -

A long time ago when I was living in Manhattan, I had some friends over for dinner, and we had grapefruit for desert. I happened to be reading The After Dinner Gardening Book and the author, Richard W. Langer, pointed out that I could grow a grapefruit tree from a seed I extracted from my desert. It's a great book, and my grapefruit grew. And grew. And grew. She came with me when I moved to Boston and from Boston to Cape Cod.

I kept her in my office when I was manufacturing fan systems. On one Valentines Day, some contractors walked around on the roof of my building and made a lot of holes in the roof. I had tarps stretched over everything, but the grapefruit tree loved it. I moved her with me to my home on Cape Cod, and she stretched up to the sun in my two story kitchen area. I finally had to screw up my courage and cut the top off so she would fit out the door so she could enjoy the summer sun. And she loved that too. I planted cuttings to be able to give to my children.

We call her '72'.  There have been times over the past almost 50 years when she hasn't looked happy and that is reflected in the events in my life. And there are other times when she is thriving, and that's reflected there as well. I consider the spawn of this simple seed a barometer of my life. (By the way, 72 has never even hinted at producing fruit but I don't hold that against her.)


Stay well,
Paul
Paul H. Raymer
P.S there's more to this newsletter  - please keep reading.
In the Ground by Jeff Carson

Jeff Carson’s In the Ground is the 14th book in the David Wolf mystery thriller series, and I have to tell you that I came into this series with this book and that was a problem for me. Both going into this story and coming out of this story are a whole lot of connections to other episodes both in the past and to come in the future. There were lot of people who were only connected to this particular story because the protagonist knew them. I didn’t know them, and I wondered who they were and why they were there.

It’s a fascinating thing about characters in a series. Some authors manage to get the books to stand clearly on their own pages. Paul Doiron does that. Patrick O’Brien, Dudley Pope, and Dewey Lamdin do that in their sea stories. Elizabeth George does it well with Detective Inspector Thomas Lynley. Some authors don’t write their books in sequence but use the same characters like Agatha Christie with Miss Marple and Hercule Poirot.

But it is a challenge to write the books in series, having the character age as the pages and books turn, with the risk that a new reader (like me in this case) is going to walk into the middle of it. My wife has a big family, and the first time I walked into the room and they all looked at me, I knew that I was never going to remember who they all were and how they were connected. But that was okay, because I knew that I was going to have time to get to know them. They were family and that was a reason to care.

It’s not a bad story. Wolf is the sheriff of a county in Colorado and he gets called into a murder scene when a body appears on the top of a gigantic machine in a mining operation. Wolf has all sorts of issues with his job and the people around him, while he tries to sort out who did the deed and why. In the process, another body shows up. Added to the mix is a female deputy that Sheriff Wolf finds attractive despite some disparity in their ages.

I wouldn’t call this a ‘thriller’ in the ilk of Robert Ludlum, David Baldacci, or Ian Fleming. The scenery is great and the main characters do have substance, but I felt that the plot line took a back seat to the ongoing story of the characters. As in all good mystery stories, the why drives the who. In this story, using a maze of clues in following the how, Carson does a good job of burying the why until close to the end in an explosion of revelation and gunfire.

Carson’s writing is solid and the editing is good. This might be a story line that would be worth turning back, and following from the beginning.
 
Pollutants

Working on the EPA's Indoor airPLUS program has allowed me to dive deeply into the array of pollutants that are floating around in the air in our homes. And there are a lot of them. Arsenic, carbon monoxide, formaldehyde, nitrogen dioxide, ozone, PCBs, radon, and little, teeny PM 2.5 particles. When I started teaching people about this stuff, I had to introduce them to PPE (Personal Protective Equipment). Now everyone has been made familiar with it. N95 masks have become common topics of conversation. I'm glad people are more aware of this stuff, but it's too bad that it has taken a pandemic to get us there.

Jeffrey May wrote a book twenty years ago called My House Is Killing Me! (He published an updated version in December of 2020.) If you are interested in some the things that are crawling around in the corners of your house, check it out. If you want to get a more international view of the problem, check out Rob Dunn's Never Home Alone. You might think differently as you kill a camel cricket or step into the shower.

Those books are mainly about living things with legs or wings. The stuff that I am mainly concerned about are the gases and particulates that are floating around in the air. As we tighten up our houses to save energy and hide from Covid 19 particles, we are trapping many things inside.

Take for example carbon monoxide. Carbon monoxide alarms that are UL listed are not allowed to alarm until the air is really bad. But low levels of CO are bad for your health as well. Just 9 ppm (parts per million) for 8 hours is the EPA action level. I've measured that on the streets of some cities. 35 ppm is high enough to get out of the house. To pass UL 2034 certification testing, the alarm must meet the following low-level thresholds:
  • 0 – 29 PPM – The detector must remain silent. If it has a digital display, it must show a zero reading.
  • 30 PPM – 69 PPM – If the carbon monoxide level remains in this range for a minimum of 30 days, the audible alarm may sound. If the unit has a digital display, it should display the CO level provided it is 30 ppm or higher.
The EPA radon action threshold is 4 pCl (Pico Curies per Liter). I have a digital radon monitor that shows me both the short term and longer term levels in my house. It fluctuates from day to day. There really are no safe levels for radon, but it's natural for there to be some.

Because of the pandemic, there is a lot of interest in this stuff. But be careful that you are getting scientifically clear information. It is way too easy to sell on fear and hype. Good ventilation and filtration will go a long way.
Live and Just Keep Learning

It's endless - and that's a good thing. If you ever stop learning, you might as well just curl up and die. There are dozens of people on social networking web pages dedicated to writers and writing who are in pain as they struggle with writing anything or with character or plot development or any of the million things that writers have to go through. Of course, that pain is not restricted just to writing. I had the same issues as I learned the building science trade. Every time I opened a door on another aspect, I would realize how much more there was to learn which is why I resist the term SME (Subject Matter Expert). To me, an expert knows everything about their subject. And that will never be me.
Understand I'm not complaining. Not in the least. The writing trade is certainly challenging, but there is a lot of help out there. Here are some resources that I have found useful:
  • Elizabeth George's books on the writer's craft Mastering the Process and Write Away
  • Steven King's On Writing;
  • Grant Richard's 1901 book How to Write a Novel;
  • Strunk & White's Elements of Style;
  • The MacMillan Handbook of English;
  • Roget's International Thesaurus (not the electronic version);
  • All of Walker Percy's books;
  • All of Antoine de Saint-Exupéry's books;
  • All of Robert Coover's books;
  • And a million other works by great authors, past and present.
So many books and so little time.
Send me your favorites.
 
  In my ongoing series of spotlighting independent bookstores, I want to celebrate Titcombs Bookshop in Sandwich on Cape Cod. The following is from the description on Titcomb's webpage:

"During its 40 years, Titcomb’s has enjoyed a warm relationship with customers and authors alike. Visiting authors are asked to pose for a picture with the trademark statue. Many customers stop to see the authors’ wall where the photos are displayed (now also on their website). Philip Craig, the late author of Martha’s Vineyard mysteries, remarked 'Titcomb's Bookshop...is a charming little shop with equally charming managers and customers. It's been my pleasure to sign books there several times…. Not only have I inscribed quite a few books, I've enjoyed excellent conversations with wonderful people who love to read. They are the most interesting people in the world, and Titcomb's draws them like bees to honey.'"

I am privileged to have my books represented there.
Some Bits for Benjamin Bunny and the Rabbit Hole

Fantasy World Mapping: If you are planning out a Fantasy World story and wondering how to map it, check out this article.

Research Management Software: Zotero is an excellent tool for organizing non-fiction research.

Trello: If you’re a visual planner, Trello is a great way to organize your writing, with different boards for each of your books or writing projects. It also has lists and cards to help you organize your tasks

DokuWiki: A private Wiki to organize notes on writing and marketing.

Logitech Combo Touch Keyboard: I have one of these for my Ipad Air. I'm not much good on the screen based keyboards. I like the feel of pressing the buttons. This allows me to get away from my desk, sit on the front porch, and write stuff  as the dawn lights up the sky.
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January 24, 2021
In this issue:
Opening Note - Glass
One Last Lie - Paul Doiron
Expandable Foam Insulation
Independent Bookstores
A Bit for Benjamin Bunny
 

Opening Note - Glass

    I used to think that all my old house lacked was a magnificent view - the ever changing light on a mountain range, an ocean vista with waves the color of steel, or a raging river torrent, cascading over rocks. But beauty, as they say, is in the eye of the beholder. Sitting at my desk as I write, looking straight ahead, I have a view partially blocked by a large computer monitor. I can only see about a thirty inch by thirty inches of the window looking to the west. The sun rises every day on the other side of the house so what I see is the pointy gable of the house across the street and branches of the trees closely clustered behind it. And as the sun rises it paints those surfaces with distractingly awesome colors. And some mornings the moon sets through the trees, dripping down the side of the house across the street. And then I get further distracted by the ripples in the old glass. Someone once told me that those ripples were caused by the glass aging, moving ever downward as a sort of liquid. But that's not true, says  Michael Cima, Professor of Materials Science and Engineering and Faculty Director of the MIT Glass Lab.  Contrary to the urban legend that glass is a slow-moving liquid, it’s actually a highly resilient elastic solid, which means that it is completely stable. So those ripples, warps, and bull’s eye indentations in really old pieces of glass “were created when the glass was created,” Cima says. They are the result of old-fashioned glass fabrication methods, not aging. (MIT School of Engineering)
Well, he can take the magic out of the material but not out of the view across from my desk of the "dawn's early light".
 


Stay well,
Paul
Paul H. Raymer
P.S there's more to this newsletter  - please keep reading.
I want to offer an apology to Katharine Lee Bates. I misspelled her name in the January 10, 2021 issue. Thank you Jill Erickson from the Falmouth Public Library. I also want to let you know that the sign guys came back and reerected the sign. I wonder if they misspelled her name the first time as well! I also want to mention that an observant reader from across the pond quoted from the poem, "Confirm thy soul in self-control - Thy liberty in law" which is truly fitting.
One Last Lie - Paul Doiron

One Last Lie is the eleventh in the Mike Bowditch series by Paul Doiron. Mike is a Maine game warden but this book starts in Florida where Mike has been sent to perform his due diligence on the background for a new chief pilot for the Maine Warden Service.Mike’s friend, Charley Stevens, told him, “Never trust a man without secrets.” This is one of Doiron’s promises to the reader. He promises that he will tell us what the lie in the title means.He promises that he will tell us why Mike is in Florida and not Maine, and who the person might be that doesn’t have secrets. That’s a lot of promises before the reader makes it through the first paragraph.

Doiron is a solid storyteller and his books are a pleasure to read, and Mike is a wonderfully imperfect protagonist. Doiron follows through on those early promises and makes and answers a bunch more along the way. Mike seeks to find his friend and mentor, Charley, who has mysteriously professed to disappearing forever, leaving a note which in itself is mysterious.

There are some great lines like, "Florida is the world capital of unintended consequences”. And “My love for the old man was close to unconditional. But this day signaled the end of my apprenticeship. I had no doubt that Charley Stevens would continue to teach me life lessons, but only small boys and fools worship other men. The point of life is to find heroism in yourself.”

There are some great action scenes like in the Florida swamp wrestling with a gigantic python. Doiron puts Mike on an island in a rushing river where there seems to be no way out. Threats all around - to him, to his friend Charley, to a partially innocent bystander with an evil, Dudley Do-right character changing his skin from good guy to villain. Nature plays a role - as it should in the wilds of the Maine woods.

This is not a major Don Quixote fable, but it is a solid backwoods yarn. Mike does have problems with his girlfriends, and it seems that Doiron is undecided about which way to go with that issue. It reminds me of the Lovin’ Spoonful song Did you ever have to make up your mind? Say yes to one and leave the other behind. Mike finally ends the story by lying to himself. And that is the last lie.

 

 
Expandable Foam Insulation

I could get into the differences between open cell and closed cell foam insulation, talk about the different weights and 'R' values, but something that is never talked about is expandable foam as a weapon.

Early work with spray foam started with Fred Gusmer and Fred Werner who invented the first reliable spray foam machine call the FF. Gusmer developed the model C gun which became the Model D with dual heated hose assemblies that could be adjusted with a thermostat. The first hoses were high voltage (220VAC). Early spray foam machines had to be rigged by combining parts of various pumps and spray guns.

The first insulation projects were tanks and pipes in refineries, sealing up mine shafts in New Mexico and cold storage facilities.

Temperature can also be a problem. In an article in Sprayfoam Professional magazine from the Fall of 2018, Mason Knowles wrote, "In closed cell sprayfoam, exothermic heat is retained within the cell for longer periods of time. During the rise  process, exothermic heat is created that helps develop the cells. When installed properly, rising foam will reach temperatures of approximately 1600 F to 2000 F. But if the foam is installed in thickness greater than the manufacturer's recommendations, the temperature within the rising foam can exceed 3000 F. Under these circumstances, the foam will discolor and begin to scorch. In extreme circumstances, the foam can auto-ignite."

Foam technology has improved greatly since those early days and has proven to be an extremely reliable and effective way to insulate and air seal a house. But it requires training and skill to get it right. But imagine, if you will, a victim buried in closed cell spray foam insulation. Might make a good story. Stay tuned.

Independent Bookstores
   Where would we be without independent bookstores? We need to celebrate them. You can talk to people on Zoom or Teams or Go to Meeting, you can buy books electronically, but you can't touch them unless the are tangible. Libraries are also wonderful. But my mother (who lived and died before the electronic era) used to go off to her local Doubleday book store and come back with at least one shopping bag full of books.
We are blessed to have at least 21 bookstores on Cape Cod. This pandemic has been brutal to every brick and mortar business, and it hasn't been kind to bookstores. So I want to do what I can to celebrate them.
This is the Eight Cousins Bookstore on Main Street in Falmouth, a short distance from where I live. It started out as a children's bookstore (and my mother spent a fortune there on her grandchildren), but it's now a full service bookstore (the last remaining one) and it supports local authors and readers.

If you have a bookstore you like wherever it is in the world, send me a picture and few words about it, and I will celebrate it here. Thank you.
A Bit for Benjamin Bunny and the Rabbit Hole

Plottr Plottr is a tool for plotting! It is a tool for creating visual timelines like a digital corkboard where you can move your scenes and story lines around. I haven't tried it, but it looks like it might be a good tool for putting a plot together.

OneLook Dictionary search. If you want to find all sort of notations for a word, check this out. I plugged in 'mephitic' just to give it a shot and it found citations in 24 dictionaries. It provides words similar, usage examples, words that often appear near mephitic, rhymes, and invented words. Just the rhymes are amazing.

PhraseExpress is a text expander and autotext program.
“Expands a short piece of text into a longer text. Especially useful for writing difficult and long character names and placenames as well as for repetitive text sections in non-fiction books."

Submittable For keeping track of publishing opportunities. You can search the free marketplace for thousands of opportunities, creative calls, grants, fellowships, scholarships, residencies, and contests. I've heard from other writers that this is very useful for keeping track of submissions.

QueryTracker has a database of 1,694 literary agents. It will also organize and track your queries and it's listed by Writer's Digest as one of the 101 best websites for writers.

I would welcome feedback on any of these (or other sites and tools) that I can pass along. Thank you.


 
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