Cape Cod

June 27, 2021 Salty Air Publishing Newsletter

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Outside Temperature: 69 °F
Outside Relative Humidity: 95%
Sunrise: 5:10 AM (Starting to get darker again)
June 27, 2021 - Falmouth, MA
In this issue:
Second Law - Beta
A Whisper Came - Keith Yocum
Low-E Windows
Independent Bookstores
Benjamin Bunny & the Rabbit Hole
PHR Books
PHR Work-in Progress
 
Second Law  - Beta
This is the draft cover of my new book! Still a ways from full publication, but it is being reviewed by my wonderful beta readers. They're being subjected to all my early typos and wrong words. I thought I got them all - but apparently I didn't! Once I get their feedback, I have to work all those adjustments in, and then get it to an official editor to do the final sorting and tweaking. Then I will start moving toward promotion and launch. It's a process!

 How the book begins is critically important.
Take a look at some of your favorite books and check out the first sentence. Story tellers have always begun with words like "Once upon a time", "There was once",  "Everybody knows", or "They're out there". The opening lines have to bring the reader immediately into the story and make them want to read the next sentence, the next paragraph, and the next page.
Books don't start with "Once upon a time" any more. I have tried something close to that in Second Law, however: "'Let me tell you a story,' Jon Megquire's mark started to say."
I hope it works.

Stay well,

Paul
Paul H. Raymer

I have come to the conclusion that a lot of reviews are written so that "word bites" can be ripped out of them and stuck on the covers of books and in advertising. Phrases like "page turner", "thriller", "incisive", "suspenseful" and "taut" are great for selling hype but not so much for the actual quality of the story. They promise a lot, but often don't deliver. For unknown writers adjectives like these are helpful. They're like "fresh garden salad" or "spring water".
Keith Yocum's book - A Whisper Came -has a lot of strong ingredients:
  • a dead body wearing strange clothing floating off Monomoy Island off Cape Cod;
  • An old, New Englandy, Cape Cod town;
  • a curious, ambitious, and attractive female reporter;
  • a spiteful ex-boyfriend;
  • a kind, attractive, intelligent charter boat captain that's 'one of the boys';
  • an abandoned, ghostly town;
  • spooky local legends;
  • an odd clutch of writers led by a well-known mystery writer with a crazy wife.
Throw all these ingredients into a book and see what happens. Yocum commits to explaining that unidentifiable body and why it is dressed in antique clothing. The protagonist is the young reporter who is a bit too ditzy, making - "Don't open that door!" - kind of decisions. There were numerous coincidences holding the narrative together.

Yocum is a strong writer with experienced writing connections including with the Boston Globe and he lives on Cape Cod. So he knows what he's writing about. He has a bucket of ingredients for an exciting book in a great venue. I'm not sure how the title connects to the story except for the spookiness. The dark lighhouse on the cover at sunset does have a solid role to play. The Whisper Came is an entertaining beach read from a local writer.
Low-E Windows

Old houses can be a challenge to keep warm. When they were built, tight fitting materials weren't available to keep the winter drafts out. The windows on my house were made by a local millwright - they didn't come from some gigantic factory. The windows work (when the sash cords don't break), but they are far from air tight.

The former owner of our house used to get out in the fall and staple polyethylene sheets onto the outside trim. You can imagine all the holes in the wood!


One of the first energy efficiency measures I invested in was triple track, aluminum storm windows. They have served us well over the years.
Low-E coatings were just a glimmer in a creative window manufacturers' mind way back then. "Low-E" stands for "Low Emissivity". Materials absorb, reflect, and emit radiant energy. If the amount of thermal radiation can be reduced, more heat stays in the house than flows back out through the window glass. A Low-E coating on the glass is an ultra-thiin, virtually invisible layer that reflects infrared heat back into the home.

There are a lot of great articles on-line regarding the benefits of Low-E windows, and the benefits are quite familiar to new home builders. But the fairly recent addition of Low-E storm windows is less well known. The Building America Solutions Center is a wonderful resource, and the article there on Low-E storm windows makes me wonder if I should start replacing our old, clear glass standbys. Click here for that article.
Independent Bookstores
It is undeniably handy to click a few buttons on the computer and have an ebook pop onto the electronic reader of choice or have a new printed paper book show up in the mail a day or so later. But the experience of standing in room full of books surrounded by the smell of the ink is a life-affirming moment. Over the past six months I have highlighted a number of local bookstores.
If you find yourself in any of these places, please do visit the local bookstore and say hello for me. I'm going to keep highlighting bookstores until the cows come home! Hit reply to this email with the name of your favorite local bookstore and I will be sure to mention them in a future issue.
If we are going to kick this stinkin' virus out of here, we need to be vaccinated. That's how we eliminate all the places it can hide and mutate. Here's the link to ABC News's vaccine resource site: PLAN YOUR VACCINE.
Benjamin Bunny & the Rabbit Hole
Beta Readers
Betabooks: I think this software may be great for people who are producing a lot of books and sending them out to a lot of people. It looks interesting and it does included some strong resources.

Bird Identification
Merlin: Shazam for Birds! This is software from the Cornell Lab of Ornithology. Maybe it's because it's nice to get out and smell the flowers and hear the birds, but it seems like they are more excited than ever this year. But not being a birder, it all sounds like 'tweety' to me. I have some birds nesting in the Impatiens hanging plants on my front porch, and I am anxious to know what they are.

Rebuilding After Disaster
Rebuild Healthy Homes: There's no mercy from climate change - hurricanes, floods, fires, tornadoes. HUD has created a handy application with all sorts of useful information about how to put things back together in a healthy home manner.
 
New Question: Do you have a preferred tool for formatting documents for publication?
Hit Reply to this message and let me know.
PHR Books
Residential Ventilation Handbook V2
Recalculating Truth
Death at the Edge of the Diamond
Also available on-line and in fine bookshops.
PHR Work-in Progress

Very exciting! Review draft is out to beta readers. Let me know your thoughts about the cover.
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